A quick write for: Writing 101:
Give and Take.
Write a post based on the contrast between two things — whether people, objects, emotions, places, or something else.
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“You know, Jack, I thought that you were a little different, but I was wrong…”
“Wrong, in what way, Mia?” asked Jack, almost spitting his words.
“You’re just the same, like all men, you’re all just the same!” said Mia, blinking back her tears.
“Oh please, you’re over exaggerating again, blowing things up in your head.”
“Whatever, Jack, you’ll just blame it all on me and my head. I should have known right from the start, but instead, I kept trying. What a fool I am.”
“Ah, but Mia, you know you are second-hand rubbish…when are you going to realise that, not worth as much as you think you are.”
With tears in her eyes, Mia grabbed her suitcase, turned her back on him and walked out the door…
Jack cried, but only for himself.
This is actually quite sad.
It is. Thank you for reading Son. ❤
What a lovely man, “…you know you are second-hand rubbish…”
Good for YOU, Mia. Leaving is the right thing to do. 😮
Not a nice person, I agree.
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A sad and telling tale of giving vs taking – so much said in this short tale. Well done Michelle
Thank you so much ❤
Sounds like a true to life story!!! I enjoyed the read
Glad you did 🙂 ❤
At least she left! It’s sad to think of how many women are really treated this way every day and never leave! Well done. 🙂
That is true, thank you ❤
Nicely done! Head versus heart–it’s such a myth. We both have them, don’t we? 😉
That we do, thanks Lorna 🙂
This is good! This is very good. 😉
Thank you, Dor ❤
Very nice!
Thank you Carol ❤
That’s a ‘narcissist’ for sure…. and nasty to boot! Diane
Agreed, thanks Diane ❤
Wow..so sad, but so real.
Thank you for reading and commenting 🙂
You’re welcome. Mine was about a relationship also, a controlling one.
Will pop over and read 🙂
Ugh, this Jack sounds like such a creep! Mia did the right thing for leaving him. Men like that don’t deserve good women. Well written Michelle! Love the image. 😀 ♥ Big Hugs ♥
Thanks so much Sonel 🙂
*Big Hugs*
I think you’ve got something really good going on here..will there be a continuation to this story? I am hoping you’ll say yes!
I might write more, thank you Raroto.
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